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	Chunkations Betreff: Mothership	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:06 Antworten mit Zitat
(google übersetzung) hallo komme ich aus England, bildete ich ein Spiel im Blitz grundlegend und ich wunderte gerade, mich was du an es dachtest Moderatorenübersetzung: Hallo, ich komme aus England. Ich erstellte ein Spiel mit BlitzBasic und ich fragte mich gerade, was ihr wohl davon haltet. www.ashfordgames.com

Chunkations

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Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:06
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(google übersetzung) hallo komme ich aus England, bildete ich ein Spiel im Blitz grundlegend und ich wunderte gerade, mich was du an es dachtest

Moderatorenübersetzung: Hallo, ich komme aus England. Ich erstellte ein Spiel mit BlitzBasic und ich fragte mich gerade, was ihr wohl davon haltet.

www.ashfordgames.com

	Eingeproggt	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:13 Antworten mit Zitat
omg Das gehört in den Funthread, oder dorthin, wo "die witzigsten Google-Übersetzungen" zu finden sind. Chunkations: Don't care about my post, its just a joke.
Gewinner des BCC 18, 33 und 65 sowie MiniBCC 9

Eingeproggt

Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:13
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omg

Das gehört in den Funthread, oder dorthin, wo "die witzigsten Google-Übersetzungen" zu finden sind. Very Happy

Chunkations: Don't care about my post, its just a joke.

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	Pdd	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:14 Antworten mit Zitat
I Think if you write in englisch, we'll understand you much better
Lieber Apfel als Birne.

Pdd

Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:14
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I Think if you write in englisch, we'll understand you much better Very Happy

Lieber Apfel als Birne.

	d-bug Betreff: Re: Mothership	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:20 Antworten mit Zitat
~edit~ Irgend ein fuchsiger Moderator editierte die Übersetzung in den ersten Post, während ich hier schrieb... @Chunkations Please do us a favor and write in english. Google translations aren't real german.

d-bug

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Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:20
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~edit~
Irgend ein fuchsiger Moderator editierte die Übersetzung in den ersten Post, während ich hier schrieb...

@Chunkations
Please do us a favor and write in english. Google translations aren't real german.

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	Tankbuster	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:20 Antworten mit Zitat
The screenshots all look very interesting.....I tried to download the demo, but the .zip file was damaged! Will this game become a MMORPG or not?? <--- GOOD IDEA^^ ~sry for wrong grammatic~
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Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:20
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The screenshots all look very interesting.....I tried to download the demo, but the .zip file was damaged! Rolling Eyes

Will this game become a MMORPG or not?? <--- GOOD IDEA^^

~sry for wrong grammatic~

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	Chunkations	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:22 Antworten mit Zitat
lol google translations are funny, I would like your opinions on my game please when you downloaded the zip file, did you make sure it was the correct size? are you using a download manager? yes i would like to make it a mmorpg everyone here has good english!

Chunkations

Fr, Feb 16, 2007 19:22
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lol

google translations are funny,

I would like your opinions on my game please

when you downloaded the zip file, did you make sure it was the correct size? are you using a download manager?

yes i would like to make it a mmorpg

everyone here has good english!

	NightPhoenix	Fr, Feb 16, 2007 22:57 Antworten mit Zitat
Hi Chunkations! I've downloaded your game... A Information for all out there, the downloadsize is 6.7 MB I must say that it's a very nice game! Nice Menus, nice graphics, but in my opinion you should work with much more sounds in your game... For example in Menu interactions, like scrolling over some buttons with the mouse, then you should hear a tiny click or something, you know? If you could record a voice, which read the story text, that would be amazing, too I'm sure some other guys are thinking the same way. Well, I think the atmospheare would become much better then! But all in all already a good looking little game MfG. ... oh in english... greetings

NightPhoenix

Fr, Feb 16, 2007 22:57
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Hi Chunkations!
I've downloaded your game...
A Information for all out there, the downloadsize is 6.7 MB
I must say that it's a very nice game! Nice Menus, nice graphics, but in my opinion you should work with much more sounds in your game...
For example in Menu interactions, like scrolling over some buttons with the mouse, then you should hear a tiny click or something, you know?
If you could record a voice, which read the story text, that would be amazing, too Wink

I'm sure some other guys are thinking the same way. Well, I think the atmospheare would become much better then!
But all in all already a good looking little game Smile

MfG. ... oh in english... greetings Wink

	Rone	Sa, Feb 17, 2007 1:42 Antworten mit Zitat
Hallo Chunkations, I think it is yust very unfinished and many aspects needs a revision, if you want that anyone pay you 15$ for this game. Sounds are barely available, graphics are really bad in my oppinion (especially the gui) and the control is the worst! -> Needs a lot of work to become a good game... What's up NightPhoenix? "Nice Menus, nice graphics...already a good looking little game" ??? I think we should stay in truth: Already only a bad looking small game with the worst control ever! Sorry, I mean no harm... Best Regards Rone

Rone

Sa, Feb 17, 2007 1:42
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Hallo Chunkations,

I think it is yust very unfinished and many aspects needs
a revision, if you want that anyone pay you 15$ for this game.

Sounds are barely available, graphics are really bad in my oppinion (especially the gui) and the control is the worst! -> Needs a lot of work to become a good game...

What's up NightPhoenix? "Nice Menus, nice graphics...already a good looking little game" ???
I think we should stay in truth:
Already only a bad looking small game with the worst control ever! Sorry, I mean no harm...

Best Regards
Rone

	Chunkations	Sa, Feb 17, 2007 3:11 Antworten mit Zitat
thanks for the opinions I put this game on the market and it only sold 1 copy! lol lol So I knew there had to be something wrong with it. How do you think it could be improved? So now I know it needs gui sound effects, and better graphics. How could the controls be improved? Im very good at telling other people what I think is wrong or good about their game, but I cannot be impartial with my own so I need help. If anyone wants me to look at their game I would be glad to.

Chunkations

Sa, Feb 17, 2007 3:11
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thanks for the opinions

I put this game on the market and it only sold 1 copy! lol lol

So I knew there had to be something wrong with it.

How do you think it could be improved?

So now I know it needs gui sound effects, and better graphics.

How could the controls be improved?

Im very good at telling other people what I think is wrong or good about their game, but I cannot be impartial with my own so I need help. If anyone wants me to look at their game I would be glad to.

	NightPhoenix	Sa, Feb 17, 2007 13:42 Antworten mit Zitat
mmmh... why you want to sell your game? I thougt the game would b freeware so, for a freeware game which isn't finished, there are nice graphics.... second hand graphics are important for game developing, so i was wrong with my opinion that your game is in progress ^^ whatever, keep working on!

NightPhoenix

Sa, Feb 17, 2007 13:42
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mmmh... why you want to sell your game?
I thougt the game would b freeware so, for a freeware game which isn't finished, there are nice graphics.... second hand graphics are important for game developing, so i was wrong with my opinion that your game is in progress ^^
whatever, keep working on! Wink

	Rone	Sa, Feb 17, 2007 14:06 Antworten mit Zitat
Hi, Your mouse control is too much direct. (I prefare moving and turn with the keyboard and perhaps a free movable crosshair for aim, without effect on ship-control...) Also there is no feeling of velocity or speedup, like in many other 3d-space shooters. Some fake inertia-effects would be nice. For the feeling of velocity I would possibly place some static particles around the ship... Also, look at other 3d-space games in this forum, like DogFight, for inspiration and comparison. Regards Rone

Rone

Sa, Feb 17, 2007 14:06
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Hi,

Your mouse control is too much direct.
(I prefare moving and turn with the keyboard and perhaps a free movable crosshair for aim, without effect on ship-control...)

Also there is no feeling of velocity or speedup, like in many other 3d-space shooters. Some fake inertia-effects would be nice.
For the feeling of velocity I would possibly place some static particles around the ship...

Also, look at other 3d-space games in this forum, like DogFight, for inspiration and comparison.

Regards
Rone

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